Tuesday 14 May 2024

#TeaserTuesday

Zack can understand why Angelina told the lies she did...

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[ID: A teal background with the title WAITING ON YOU at the top and out now in ebook & paperback just below the excerpt The except reads:

Artist44: I can’t speak for the rest of the group because although they’re my friends, I don’t know them in real life so don’t know how they’d react to finding out you lied, but as for me? I don’t care.
AngelAnge: You don’t care?
Artist44: Nope, when I found that journal entry all I cared about was making sure you were okay and that was it. I figured that you had a reason for lying to us all and I wanted to know what it was so that I could help – in anyway I could – make your life better. If that just means giving you a place where you can come to talk to someone who *doesn’t* think you’re a loser, then so be it. I like you Ange, whether you’re the most popular girl in school or not. So yeah, we can still be friends, in fact I’d be pretty disappointed to come in here and not see your nick in the chat list. I enjoy talking with you, so as long as you’re able to still come in, then I don’t have a problem with it.

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Monday 13 May 2024

Knowing How To Approach Editing - The After Process

KNOWING HOW TO APPROACH EDITING

As someone who has edited a number of books, and has worked with a handful of editors, I thought that I would talk to day about how to approach editing. Of course this will all depend on your editor, their style of doing things, and you as a writer, but there are some common themes when it comes to editing that translate from editor to editor.

Personally I've worked with both editors who go through the manuscript with me, leave comments, and then I make changes along with them so that we're both sure that I'm on the right path. I've also worked with editors who give edit letters, some for the whole document at once, others, like my current editor Robert, one every quarter, and I've known of editors who do it for every act of the novel. All of these ways of doing things are valid and it's just about finding that fit, that editor, and that style that work for your own process.

I prefer the edit letters and then getting to go through the document at my own pace and work out what needs to be changed and moved around and what can be tweaked in place. I've worked with editors who do it all chapter by chapter, and I found that a lot more stressful and a lot harder to see the whole book as a whole. Of course the former means there are many read throughs to make sure I catch everything before it moves onto the line editor, and the latter means a lot of rewrites through the editing process and it all takes a lot longer to get through. Both work, and both are a great way to do things, it just comes down to personal preference.

So how do you work out which way works for you? How do you know which one is going to help you best craft the book into shape? And how do you then know how to approach rewrites and editing once you've landed on a style that works for you? Glad to asked because I'm gonna give you some of my tips on doing all of that and more.

#1 FINDING THE WAY THAT WORKS FOR YOU

I started off with an editor who would do corrections as she went, and I would follow along and make my tweaks here and there. It worked for me, at the time, and it wasn't until later on that I started to realise that the whole part of that process meant that by the time the book had gone to line edits, I was burned out on the story. That's one of the reasons I was happy to switch to a different editor and a different style of editing.

But you may not know that, and it might take you a while to get to a point where you do know how you work. While I've always been lucky with editors, finding people who meet my needs and also work well with me and my stories, I know that for a lot of writers, indie I mean because trad generally don't get an option in which editor they work with, it's not a case of one editor/editing team and done. Some will change from book to book, others will be with one editor for one genre and another for a different genre, and that's valid.

So if you find yourself moving through the process and realising that the way your current editor does things doesn't work for you, then it's perfectly fine for you to have a discussion, see about whether there can be any changes made to the situation, or if you need to amicably part ways and find another editor.

#2 SAMPLE EDITS CAN HELP
A lot of the time when you're first looking for an editor, you don't really know how they personally work. You might be able to approach clients they've had, and talk it through with them. Or you might be able to ask for a sample edit. It's literally as the name implies, a chance to have a look at how they make their comments - either as comments on the document or in edit letters etc - and how they work their way through the document.

There is usually no cost for this, and no obligation to book with them should you find that your style and theirs just doesn't match. It's okay to get sample edits and see which one might be the better fit for you. These are industry standard things, most editors will offer some kind of sample, and it's up to you to decide whether or not you want to go further along with it.

If you know ahead of time how you personally work, like you're looking for a new editor having going through the process before, then this makes things easier because you're able to basically upfront ask how they form their edits. But if you don't, then sample edits can be a big help.

#3 APPROACHING REWRITES AND EDITS
I don't want to imply that every book you write will need extensive rewrites, but I will just say that the majority of them will need a lot of work done. It's up to you to define how much a lot of work is. I've never written a book, and it be perfect. I don't think anyone ever has. There's the want to believe that because this book is your baby, that there are no flaws, but the point of the professional edit is that you can't see those flaws.

Right now, I'm in the middle of edits and rewrites for a book coming out later this year. I went into extensive revisions and while I like to think the story was as solid as it could be going into edits, there were, there always are, things that I'd not caught. The point is that you are too close to the story to pick up on those little bits. Like one thing my dev editor dinged me on was a turn of phrase I've used a little too much.

But approaching rewrites and edits is a very personal thing, it's about how you work as a writer. I usually tackle the first round of edits on a two chapters as a time basis. I have my edit letter up on one side of the screen and my document on the other, and I spend as long as I need to getting those chapters to where they need to be, and then I move onto the next two.

After I've done a full edit pass, I will then go through and reread five chapters at a time. That way I know that anything I might have missed on that first pass will be caught, and when that's done? I do it again. Just to be doubly sure. Now that might not work for you, but I always found that tackling it in small bites made things a whole lot easier for me.

You gotta do what works for you, and that's valid.

So yeah, editing is a beast and it goes from finding someone who works for you, and then tackling the rewrites as well. It's a long drawn out process and it's something that I always find draining, but when you do find an editor who is good with your personal style, they are gold dust and you should hang onto them for as long as you can.

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Friday 10 May 2024

Review of Fight by HG Lynch

 
Tilly and Dominic are prisoners of the witches, and Spencer will do anything to rescue them, even as his dreaded wedding day gets nearer.
 
 What he doesn't know, is there's a traitor in their midst, and she's determined to make him hers.
 
 With her eighteenth birthday approaching, Tilly is in serious danger of becoming host to a demon, while Dominic suffers every time she leaves his side.
 
 Time is running out for all of them, and the only way any of them will make it is if they fight.

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My Review: 5 STARS

I couldn’t help myself and dived into this book the moment I finished the first. With everything left the way it was at the end of book one, I needed to know what happened next. With Tilly and Spencer and everyone else, the story pulls you in from the first page and has you hooked until the very end, and even then you’re left desperate to know what happens in the finale. I adored the characters and while werewolves are not my usual jam, this was a book, and series, that had me convinced that could change. Very much recommended and very much enjoyed!

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Tuesday 7 May 2024

#TeaserTuesday

Tara's never had much time for bullies...

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[ID: A green background with yellow flowers laid against it, with the title DYING THOUGHTS - THIRD WISH at the top and out now in ebook & paperback just above the title. The except reads:

“Piss off, Jody, don’t you have somewhere else to be?” I asked, hoping she’d take the hint and bugger off. She didn’t though, because Jody is none too quick.
“Or you’ll what? Kill me and hide the body like you did with Cassie and your mum?” she sneered.
That did it. I’d had enough of her already so I did what anyone else would have done in my situation: I stood up and grabbed her hair and slammed her face on the wood between the booths. There was a sickening crack and I knew I’d broken her nose...again.

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Monday 6 May 2024

Keeping The Fun In Writing - The Creative Process

KEEPING THE FUN IN WRITING

One thing that has always mattered to me is that the majority of writing should be fun. Now I know that as an author, writing is also my job, and not everyone sees every part of their job as fun. I personally am not fond of the professional edit. I'm lukewarm when it comes to revisions, but I do both of those things anyway because they are part of my job, and I have to do them.

But the part of the job that I do, mostly, see as fun, is the drafting. Now I know there are writers who hate drafting and much prefer revision or editing, and that's okay, that's valid, and you gotta do what works for you, but since I'm talking about keeping the fun in writing and, for me, that's in drafting, I'm gonna focus on that, but feel free to substitute that with whatever phase of the process you love most!

As I said, this is my day job, it's my full-time gig. I am a full-time author, though full disclosure, it does not, as of yet, pay me full-time. I don't want to give the impression that I'm rolling in it and that's why it's full-time. I have been very lucky to be in a position where I can call this my job, and I do work hard at making sure everything is done right, and in a timely manner.

For example, when it comes to drafting, and because I'm an indie author, I know that the only deadlines I really have to meet are the ones I've set myself. Editing and revision are a different beast in that I have people relying on my to do the work, so that needs to be a bit more strict. This means that I can, should I wish to, write once a week, do nothing more, and spend the rest of the time doing other things. I know that doesn't sound like something I would do, but my point is, that because of knowing that I'm able to plan my time, choose where my energy goes, and enjoy myself along the way.

I'm not going to sit here and say that every single day is full of fun filled times and that I enjoy writing every single chapter. I don't. There are sometimes many days in a row when every sentence feels like pulling teeth, and every chapter takes forever, and the anxiety is there in the pit of my stomach reminding me that I have to do this and I have to keep moving forward otherwise terrible things await. (They usually don't, but anxiety is like that, an overdramatic person.)

But, for the most part, I enjoy my work. I love getting to sit there for an hour or so and just lose myself in fiction. If I feel like something needs changing, it gets changed. If I feel like the story needs to go another way, same, it can do that. I have been writing for a very long time. I started seriously when I was 19 and I'm now 42, so over half my life has been spent living in other worlds and I love my job. (I did a piece about that here

I love getting to be creative and have it be a massive part of my life, but there are some times when I have to remind myself of all of that, to keep that fun in the writing. After all, if I let myself trickle down that dark path of not enjoying my work, or my currents WIP, then I find myself in a funk that is hard to shake. It's one of the reasons I find the professional edit so difficult because I end up n that dark path a whole lot. I get over it though, and I am, usually, drafting along side which helps me find that balance.

So whatever makes the work fun, try and keep doing that as much as you're able, and keep writing your stories!

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Friday 3 May 2024

Review of Circle Of Embers by Kelly Carrero

 
They said the demons would go after everyone we loved and cared about. They said I was theirs to command. They said I was one of them.
 
 What they didn’t say was what would happen to me during my awakening. Nor did they tell me the whole truth about what I am.
 
 Someone is keeping a secret, one that will change the world. And while I’m off trying to save my family, others are slithering behind the shadows, waiting until the time when they can unleash their attack on me and damn our world forever.
 
 But if they think they’re going to win, they don’t know me very well. There isn’t a thing I wouldn’t do to protect those I love—even if I may die trying.

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My Review: 5 STARS

I read the first book in this series in one sitting and had to devour this one too. I had to know what was going to happen to Kali and the world she lived in. The opening was explosive and despite not being someone who enjoys many vampire books, this one had me hooked from the first page. I adored the many twists and turns the narrative took and the build up to that ending and big reveal blew me away. I have the third book in the series and am desperate to read it and find out what happens next. A very good series and one that I recommend!

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