Friday 31 December 2021

Review of Demon Pride by Ingrid Seymour

Screwing up isn't new for me, but getting possessed by Lucifer's son takes the prize.

I’m Lucia Sunder, and I’ve snatched an apprentice spot at the League of Demon Hunters. Score!

I want to move quickly up the ranks, so when I overhear that a demon has been spotted in Grand Central Station, I’m determined to quell it.

But what I find when I get there is totally unexpected. Who knew demons could be so sexy? He’s a delightful sin wrapped up in Armani.

Give me a break!

As I pull out my Quelling Sword, I quickly realize I’m in over my head. He’s no ordinary demon. He’s the son of Lucifer, Drevan Morningstar, the future King of Hell.

The next thing I know, I’m possessed by him, and the League of Demon Hunters is out to kill me.

Drevan says he’s on a mission to save humanity—yeah, right!—and lucky me, he has decided I’ll be his helper. He promises to go back to hell once we succeed. But how am I supposed to help him when demon hunters are determined to stick their Quelling Swords right through my heart?

Yet, I have no other choice. I need to work with the devil and hope I won’t lose my soul in more ways than one.
 

My Review: 5 STARS

I’ve read other books in the Sunderverse, and the cover and blurb of this one intrigued me so I dived right in.  I loved the world building, it was so rich and clear with the characters and the lore being the League of Demon Hunters. I adored Lucia as a protagonist and loved reading her journey, going through the highs and lows along the way, and that ended in punched me in the stomach! I am desperate to know more and will be following this series from now on. Another great book by Seymour and highly recommended! 

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Tuesday 28 December 2021

#TeaserTuesday

 

Everything is changing, and the battles keep on coming, but Lock won't give up the fight...

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 [ID: A grey/blue background with the title LIGHTS OFF at the top and Out now in ebook and paperback just below it. The except reads:

It was weird how quickly everything changed. One minute we were all celebrating and the next we were back to work. I barely had a chance to catch my breath before we were back in the trenches and fighting the next battle.

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Monday 27 December 2021

5 Facts About My Current WIP: The Lying Truth

5 FACTS ABOUT MY CURRENT WIP: THE LYING TRUTH

I recently started two new projects for NaNoWriMo in November, and so I thought that I would give you five facts about them, starting with The Lying Truth, which is a young adult contemporary/paranormal romance, depending on who you ask. It's my first standalone for a number of years and I'm really enjoying writing it.

So without further ado, lemme jump into these five facts!

#1 EVA IS A LIAR

Eva Torrent is the main character in this book, and there's one thing you'll know about her off the bat. She's a liar, she's honest about being so, but it's always been her way of not feeling so alone. Her parents work all the hours they can to keep the heat and lights on, and Eva is very much a loner. It's only been this past week when she lied about her mum getting a new job that she's released something weird is happening, her lies are coming true, and it doesn't seem to matter who she says it too, her parents have new jobs, they live in a nicer house and she's suddenly best friends with the most popular girl in school, all because of lies she told.

#2 EVA ISN'T SURE WHAT'S REAL AND WHAT'S NOT
Because of her lies coming true, Eva ends up in a relationship with the hottest guy in school. Only she realises what that means, she doesn't want to have lied herself into a relationship, it's creepy, it's wrong, and she really hoped that he'd like her for her, as in a genuine connection not brought about by her lies. Bradley, her boyfriend says he noticed her before, but Eva can't work out if that's a real memory or a false one, and it's tearing her apart.

#3 SHE DOESN'T WANT TO LIE ANY MORE

It's only been a week since the lies started coming true, but in her mind, that's way too long. Swearing to herself to only be honest from now on, Eva is trying to keep hold of the friendships that may have started out as false, but have become real. She's well aware of the changes she's made along the way to her life, to people she cares about, and to reality itself.

#4 SHE HAS ONE FRIEND WHO SEEMS TO GET IT

While she managed to lie herself into the popular crowd, none of the others really seem to want to know Eva. She and Lacey are close, but Eva doesn't know how true that is, whether it's real or a fabrication from her lies. It seems like only she can remember the real memories mingled in with the false ones. Enter Case, another kinda loner in her year, they seem to understand that things aren't what they seem, and have been a true friend to Eva. The only problem is, that Eva isn't sure if Case actually remembers the real stuff, or if they've just gotten close because of sharing lessons. Either way Eva is in over her head.

#5 EVA DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO NEXT

While she could admit that she lied, and undo all the lies she's told, it's not just her life that effects. Her parents, her friends, her boyfriend, and she's not sure if she's strong enough to let all of that go without some kind of idea about what it would do. Eva is basically struggling to keep her head above water and has no idea what to do next.

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Friday 24 December 2021

Review of Summer’s Lost by Kristy Brown

Deep down, Summer knows something important is missing. Something her head can’t remember, but her heart won’t let her forget. Alex must find her before his people do. With no-one at his side, and a black-eyed enemy from the past hunting them, can he put all feelings aside and fight for the girl he loves once again? Their fate is already written. The prophecy is already set. Is love between them impossible?

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My Review:  5 STARS

I picked this up having read the first book and desperate to know what happened next. I was hooked back into the story from the first page, the idea that Summer could maybe have something resembling a normal life, while Alex remembers everything but only wants to keep Summer safe. It was engaging and thrilling as we went through the various twists and turns. The book had me hooked and I only paused when I absolutely had to sleep, and next morning was diving back in to finish it. I love this story and love the series, it’s one I’ll be keeping an eye on and reading more of. Overall an amazingly brilliant paranormal romance that I very much recommend!

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Tuesday 21 December 2021

#TeaserTuesday

 

Jessie can't help but notice the girl in the canteen, but she has no idea why she hates her...

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 [ID: A red background with the title CRAMPING CHRONICLES: THE FIRST TWINGE at the top and Out now in ebook and paperback just below it. The except reads:

As our eyes met again, I couldn’t help but smile back, a warmth filling me just for a heart beat, lifting my hand to wave, before she cut me down with a glare.
She looked royally pissed off, and I didn’t have the first clue why.

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Monday 20 December 2021

My Plantsing Ways - The Creative Process

MY PLANTSING WAYS

As you may know, I am a neither a full planner nor a full panster when it comes to drafting and writing in general. I need some kind of outline, however slim it may be, to be able to guide me through the story, though I don't plan in detail, and I do generally end up pantsing a lot of the drafting itself.

I thought that today I would give you some idea of what it's like for me as a planster, and how I work, and why I work the way I do. I know there has been a lot of talk in the writing community about being either one or the other, but to be honest I think most people are a mixture of the two. While there are some rare unicorns who are full on one or the other, the majority of writers have some element of each to their process.

So I'm going to break it down into the two categories: what I plan, and what I pants, and give you some details on each along the way!

WHAT I PLAN
-> I don't generally focus on word count, but do a chapter a day, and because of this, I need to know what happens in each chapter so that I don't have to worry too much about what I'm going to write. This stops me from getting writer's block and it also allows me to explore the story in my own way. Before I start writing, I will write out a chapter plan, with bullet points for each chapter and what I want to happen in it. Usually this is a sentence at most, but sometimes it ends up a little lengthier.

-> I plan my characters to a point. I make sure that I have their name, age, description and such, as well as any points that really stick out to me during the planning phase. Sometimes they spring fully formed in my mind, other times they end up a little distant and that's something that I need to work out more during drafting.

-> I plan my revisions, when I finish drafting, I will read through the book, a few months later, and make a detailed outline of what's happening when. This allows me to catch any errors and any plot holes, so that I can make the changes as I revise. It can take me up to three read throughs to get everything I need though.

WHAT I PANTS

-> While I will always have some idea from the chapter plan, there will be times during the drafting process where I go off plan, exploring a plot point that I've discovered along the way. This can lead to problems in the revision stage which is why I do the outlining then, so that I've made sure that I've tied up all the loose threads that I left while drafting.

-> I plan the main characters, but sometimes, like I said above, they don't really show themselves to me until I'm in the thick of drafting, and that's when the nuances and quirks of their personality will come through. I work out what kind of person they are, what they want, what their goal is, and all of that during the drafting phase. This can lead to issues where the first few chapters of the book don't match the rest, but I also edit as I go, so those are usually caught by then.

-> I pants the subplots. While I will, sometimes, have thought of them in advance, other times it's more important to me to find them along the way. Yes, this might lead to them being a little rushed or the like, but that's why I do the detailed outline when revising.

So there we go, those are my ways of planning and pantsing when it comes to drafting and revising a novel. By the time the book gets to the editing stage, I'm pretty solid in the story, and where it's going, as well as the characters, so it's easier to make changes based on that.

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Friday 17 December 2021

Review of Holiday Blues by Sara Breaker

Snowed in at school over Christmas. What else is there to do? Maybe fall in love with the guy you least expected? Too bad he's dating your roommate...

College junior Ashleigh De Luca has always been happy to go with the flow. Not one to call attention to herself, she's a firm believer in keeping her head down, doing the work, following the plan.

Until one Christmas break when the plan is shot to heck as heavy snow grounds all flights and she's stuck at the school dorms with her flighty roommate Wanda.

And Wanda has all kinds of plans for vacation. Such as bagging the hottest jock in school just because her dull, long-suffering boyfriend Locky is miles away.

But surprise! Locky decides to drop in for a visit and is knocking on the door. It's up to Ashleigh to run interference.

Except dull Locky is not so dull anymore. In fact, one look from his intense, puppy dog eyes makes Ashleigh want to step way, way out of her comfort zone.

So exactly who's going to distract whom?

Amazon

My Review: 5 STARS

I picked this up because it sounded like a sweet read. I jumped in and ended up finishing it all in one sitting, it was a nice fast read that just gets you in the mood for the holidays. Ash is a delightful character and watching her try and navigate the story without standing up for herself just makes it even more enjoyable. The characters were relatable and engaging and I thoroughly enjoyed it. A delightful sweet holiday romance and one that I would very much recommend!

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Tuesday 14 December 2021

#TeaserTuesday

 

Hayley has a mission, and she won't let anyone stop her from pulling it off...

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For the past seven days, since her escape from the base on Raildown, Hayley Lightson had been on a mission. She’d always had a plan to escape, ready for the day they came for her. Her contacts had gotten her as far as the border to Evendown, and it seemed that her ruse had worked.

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Monday 13 December 2021

The Trials Of An Indie Author: A Year Off Editing

THE TRIALS OF AN INDIE AUTHOR: A YEAR OFF EDITING

As you all know, I was supposed to release a second book in October, but back in March I decided to take the year off, having decided that the book needed more time to cook and I needed a break from the rigours of editing. It was purely a personal decision, but I also know that a lot of the time, the feeling is, especially in the indie world, that we have to keep pushing to release and release and release, or risk losing our readership.

I wouldn't agree that's true, while I am still very much a small fish in the indie world, I have kept my readership through numerous hiccups along the way, and this time wasn't any different. I still have people looking forward to the book, which will be the second in the Cramping Chronicles series, and I'm still planning on going back to editing in April of 2022.

However, there is something to be said for taking a break. I was close to burned out, struggling to see the forest for the trees, and even at some points, was thinking about giving up on writing altogether. Now it wasn't anything to do with the editors, it was all me having pushed myself in 2019 to release three books and then while I dropped back to two in 2020, that year was hell for a lot of us. At the end of it all, come 2021 I was ready for a break.

I'm not one of those writers who enjoys the editing process. I never have been, and so for me, it's especially draining and I do find it hard to go through. My editing process is about five long months of back and forth with developmental, line, and finally a proofreader. It's a lot of work to take on, and because of taking that break, I've been able to refine my revision process, and work better at making sure the book is in a better place. I've also been able to spend time revising the next book in line to be edited, which has helped some of my stress levels there as well.

It's not been an easy couple of years for anyone, with the pandemic still ongoing, and on a personal note, some family stress and also being diagnosed with a new chronic condition, I've felt like I had too many balls in the air so to speak and that I had to drop some or else I was going to crash out completely. So I made the decision to take this past year and I have to say that I've not regretted it since. I even took October off revisions entirely so that I could have my first holiday in a long while.

So what have I learned during this time? Well, a couple of things, and also some small things along the way!

#1 BREAKS DON'T MEAN YOU'VE FAILED

This was something huge for me because I really was hearing that I needed to be releasing twice a year at least, to be able to stay relevant. I agonised over the decision to drop my second release, and while I had moments of doubt, whether this meant that I'd failed at being an indie author, or whether I would be able to come back as strong as I had before, I soon learned by the reaction to the news, that it wasn't a failure. It was just a break, and breaks are okay to take, no matter where you are in the publishing process.

#2 SOMETIMES YOU NEED TO CATCH YOUR BREATH

I love working with my editors, and don't have a bad word to say about any of them, but sometimes you do need to pause and catch your breath, work out how to keep moving forward, and take that time to refill your creative well and get a chance to look at the project with fresh eyes. I've spent the past few months revising a different project, while also checking in with Second Pang ready to go to the editor in April. It's given me the distance I needed to be able to look at it more objectively and work out what works, and what doesn't. I've even had time to think about it so much that I've caught things that might've popped up in the editing, and are now already fixed.

#3 THE SMALL STUFF COUNTS
Along the way I've worked out what I don't like about the editing process, I've worked out how to better cope with those aspects, and I've talked to my editors and we've been able to work on how to make everything better for everyone involved. Without that time away, it would've just been another five months of high stress for me, and I'd have ended up burned out completely.

So, while I won't be going back into edits until April, I feel like I've learned a lot about how I work and why I work that way. I may not ever actually enjoy editing, but I do feel more equipped to deal with things going forward, and that's not a bad thing.

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Friday 10 December 2021

Review of Summer's End by Kristy Brown

She wakes up in the hospital, badly burned with no identity.
He’s been trained to kill her before she burns the world to ashes.
When they finally meet, will he be able to take her life now that he’s started to feel for her?
His fate is already written.
The prophecy is already set.
Love between them is forbidden.

Amazon

My Review: 5 STARS

I picked this up because the cover called to me, the blurb was enough to intrigue me and I was in the mood for a different kind of paranormal romance. I ended up losing myself in the book and reading it all in one sitting. I even picked up the second in the series because I was desperate to know what happens next. The story is engaging from the first page, secrets, intrigue and twists a plenty and not the usual kind of paranormal romance. I adored Summer and Dooney, and I can’t wait to see where their story takes them next. Overall, an amazing read, and one that I recommend!

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Tuesday 7 December 2021

#TeaserTuesday

 

 

Everything comes to an end eventually, and with everything going on Tara is just living her life...

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“Yes, teachers, they seem to think we should stay for the whole lesson,” he joked. I chuckled and my grin got wider. “We going back to yours?”
“I er… I dunno. I think my dad has another agent to interview, so it might be all clear or he might be doing it at home.”
“And we do have a date later,” he said.
“We do. I believe someone suggested dinner and a movie?”
“He did. So what time?”
“Shall we say about six? Dad’s gotten a bit weird about me being out too late, so dinner might have to be the drive-thru at McD’s.”

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Monday 6 December 2021

The Trials Of A Crime Writer: Off The Wall Twists

THE TRIALS OF A CRIME WRITER: OFF THE WALL TWISTS

I've been writing crime for a number of years now. My first book, Blackout, was very much a thriller, and because of that I've written some weird and wonderful twists along the way as well. Personally, when I read a thriller, I want a twist I didn't see coming, but not one that comes outta the left field and makes you feel like it doesn't actually make sense. It's one of the reasons that the ending for a thriller is very hard to pull off, no matter how much books you've read and/or written on the subject.

So how do you, in my mind, pull off a twist? I'm glad you asked! I'm gonna give you some tips, some do's and don'ts and see if they can help you while plotting, or writing, your own thriller/crime story.

#1 FORESHADOW AND RED HERRINGS
I feel like this is a huge thing. If you're leading up to a twist, there should be, no matter how minor, some kind of foreshadowing for what's coming. If you know that you're gonna have this character be the killer, then you need to make sure there are some hints along the way that maybe an astute reader will pick up on. What you don't want to do is having it turn out to be someone who you didn't even really give hints to. That just blows the twist I think.

As far as red herrings go, you can have more than one, but when reading, I like to know that there's more than one particular character who could be the bad guy. You don't want to have so many that everyone is confused, but enough that you might be leading the reader down one path, while also setting things up for the bad guy's big reveal at the end. I've seen this done really well, where I am one hundred percent sure it's a certain character and then it turn out that they're innocent and there's a reasonable explanation for all the red herrings along the way.

#2 TIMING IS EVERYTHING

If you know that you're in the lead up to the big showdown, then you need to make sure that you pick your moment to do that big reveal. Too soon and it kills the tension, too late, and it feels off, and it can lead to ruining the ending.

I like to do my big reveals when I feel the characters are all in the right place emotionally as well as physically. Sometimes in my first draft it can come off a bit rushed, but then, having worked out the beats of the story, I'll be able to go back and revise it so that it all works out, and the pacing is right too. I recently finished a trilogy and I found that the majority of the ending worked perfectly, while there was a part that needs a little bit of a lead up in the first two books, but that's fixable, so don't worry too much if you don't get it right first time!

#3 MOTIVES MATTER
I've read thrillers and crime books with certain twists that have made sense, if the character had a different motive. Sometimes you'll have a massive twist, but it doesn't really match the motive of the bad guy, it just kinda feels like the author wanted to use this twist but hadn't really thought it through. If you want to have the ending that packs a punch, then you need to make sure the motive behind whatever crime, matches the twist and the actions of the characters involved.

For example, having someone go on a revenge spree, killing those that wronged them, is fine, but if you're big twist is that it's actually someone somewhat related to the wronged party, the two don't really match up and that just leaves readers feeling a little deflated and let down because of it. So examine your motives and work out what's going to happen when you get to that twist.

So there we go, those are my tips on twists in thrillers and crime, and like I said, I've read a ton of these, and usually find myself surprised by the twist at the end. Sometimes it'll be a good surprise, and sometimes it won't be, but keeping these things in mind will help you write a thriller that has people turning the pages desperate to know what's going to happen next, and give you a twist that packs a good punch.

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Friday 3 December 2021

Review of Fake Notes by Gracie Graham

Thorne Roberts is a Hollywood Adonis.

America's teen heartthrob.

Just another raven-haired, sharp-jawed, entitled bad-boy celebrity with a pretty face. Everything I detest.

So when he comes into my family's place of business and makes demands, I shut him down.

But now my parents are being sued, and it's my fault. Their business and my future are at stake. So when he stares at me with those brilliant green eyes and proposes a fake relationship to get him out of trouble and save my parent's bakery from inevitable demise, I say yes.

After all, how hard can it be?

All I have to do is fake-date America's hottest Hollywood star without getting feelings involved.

No biggie.

There's only one problem: He's not quite the wild child the media makes him out to be. He's actually kind of broken and . . . sweet.

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My Review: 5 STARS

I picked this up having read the first in the series and desperate to see what lay in store for Thorne and Scarlett. I adored the start, loving the way the story jumped into action, and gave us a glimpse of the way Scarlett is, and also how Thorne acts. I breezed through the story in one sitting as I was desperate to know what would become of the pair of them. My heart was filled with joy as the story progressed and I loved the characters and how relatable they were. An amazing sweet romance and one that I would very much recommend!

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Thursday 2 December 2021

Author Tag: Winter Tag [CC]

Revisiting an older tag today and talking about the characters in Second Pang! #Authortube

WINTER TAG

CO-WRITTEN BY DAL CECIL RUNO AND ME

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RULES
- GIVE A SHORT SYNOPSIS OF YOUR CURRENT WIP
- YOU CAN USE EACH CHARACTER UP TO THREE TIMES

ICE: Which of your characters is likely to slip and slide?
SNOW: Which of your characters would be the first out there to build a snowman?
FIREPLACE: Who likes to snuggle up with a book and a nice warm fire?
HOT CHOCOLATE: Who takes charge of what to do on a cold day?
SNOWFLAKES: Who doesn't mind the cold and who would prefer to live on a tropical island away from it?
HOLIDAY SWEATERS: Who would wear the most ridiculous holiday sweater?
PRESENTS: Who buys the most thoughtful presents?
BAH HUMBUG: Who doesn't celebrate or get into the season and why?
YULE: Which two are most alike, but wouldn't agree with you saying so?
MOTHER IGGY: Who would be the mother figure, the wise mentor or just the mamafriend in your story and why?
MISTLETOE: Who is a double edged sword type of character? Healing to some and poisonous to others?
LONGEST NIGHT: Which character is more likely to withstand all the downs of an antagonistic force and still keep up hope for the brighter days?
NORTHERN LIGHTS: Which character is the colourful spirit who lights up everyone else during the dark and longer nights?

TAGGING ANYONE WHO WANTS TO DO IT.

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